Tawnik's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

["Snowfall"]

Great animation

good concept, the audio doesnt match the story and when the big snowball is falling the shadow shouldnt shrink but it should grow ;)

DonkeysBazooka responds:

fraid not. Try it on your wall. Shine a light on your finger, and bring it closer and farther from the wall. Your shadow condenses as it gets closer to the wall, because less light is getting onto the wall behind your finger.

[The Parkour Collab]

Wheres my part ?

Seriously, where is it ? I submited it, you said its gonna be in, why is it not ?

Mesmay kicks yo ass <3 Macks was well animated and Drifts' was funny =)

Fizzled responds:

It's after the credits! (sorry, i'll change that)

[LARRY episode 1]

Well to be honest..

You've got a lot of potential, your drawings are amazing, so is the voice act and the music, the animation, well, it suits your style, it serves it pretty well, you know all the principles and you just developed yourself a way how to do that, but ! And its big but, if you'll ever want to move to 3d animation you might have difficulties with it, at least I think that, cause you're doing this style and yes, you're awesome at it ! (the walking wasnt perfect, but thats just tiny problem) but in 3d, theres no layering, you have to move the objects as they're supposed to be moved, move the joints every frame, of course I love your works, I'd just recommend you to try out frame by frame animations with redrawing every frame, its just something to keep in head, if you want to develop your skills more ;)

Great flash, I enjoyed watching it.

Jazza responds:

i can but i'm lazy. i'd rather be able to make decent content using some FBF that is submitted more frequently. as much as everyone LOOOVES adam phillips including myself, we hate waiting 2 years for the next aniamtion.

thanks though, it would be fun to see them in 3d, havn't thought of that

[Captain Planet Strip Club]

great as always

The Artwork is just great, concept is good too, I also like the voice acting but you could have done much better animation if you followed the animation principles, one of them is "EASING" it makes things much more enjoyale, please, ease more and you'll be great Flash artist.

Sexual-Lobster responds:

if i'm ever up against a deadline i'm not going to make i'll think about it.

[Awesome Force pt. 2]

I liked it

especially the part with "I smell something, whats that, a vomit ? blaaaa "

great, its worth the front page

FutureSmello responds:

Yeah, I love that bit too.

Aw cool, thanks.

[Awesome Force pt.1]

haha

pretty awesome, the artwork is nice the animation above the standard here, but dont forget to have more fluid movements, add more inbetweens and easeeee more, please, you'll be awesome one day =)

and yeah, its worth higher score =)

FutureSmello responds:

I know what you mean, I'd normally spend more time on the animation, but there was a bit of a limit. But thanks for your advice still.

Cheers. ;D

[Dinner with Frenchie]

lol

Give me give me xD that was just soooo funny =) keep up the good work mate !

Bobert-Rob responds:

I do what I can! Thanks for watchin'!

[October short]

good

definitely worth better score !

fearing responds:

thank you buddy :-)

[Bastard Frank]

Deserves more !

The animation was done pretty well, you should get AT LEAST 4.00
It was random, but I like that, everything was good, nice one !

fearing responds:

heey fellow sp'ian :-)

thanks for your support.. for some reason i always feel that i get less than i should so it doesnt matter haha.. more soon!

btw your newproject on your page looks great!